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kehinde  Awolesi's avatar

This was good.. If I may perhaps offer suggestions, I think it would have been better if you had given us a peek into the culture of Tyrannoson. Unique dressing, ways of greeting, and even special holidays. These are things that make a culture unique and deepen our experience of it.

Doing this would make the reader experience more realism.

I think you have been impressive so far.

Cheers

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Isaac Angel Meza's avatar

I love what you’re doing with this story. I’m currently taking seminary courses, one on the life and thought of C.S. Lewis and one on spiritual warfare. Your novel embodies the application of knowledge from those courses. This is the kind of work I like to see from Christian creatives.

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